This week we're going to hook you with just six sentences from our WIPs. Mine is from Planning for Love, a contemporary romance that I'm just three chapters away from finishing. The characters are standing in the lovely picture you see to the left, Chicago's Shedd Aquarium. Enjoy!
“Whatever it takes to put a smile on your face,” she promised with a saucy wink.
“I can think of seven things without even trying. You’ve even got clothes on in five of them.”
A pilot light of answering heat flared brightly behind her mermaid eyes, then shuttered so fast he almost thought he’d imagined it. So much for good intentions. The filter between his dick and his mouth kept short circuiting around Ivy.
“Whatever it takes to put a smile on your face,” she promised with a saucy wink.
“I can think of seven things without even trying. You’ve even got clothes on in five of them.”
A pilot light of answering heat flared brightly behind her mermaid eyes, then shuttered so fast he almost thought he’d imagined it. So much for good intentions. The filter between his dick and his mouth kept short circuiting around Ivy.
Wow! I'm hooked :)
ReplyDeleteMe, too, Margie.
ReplyDeleteLoved it, wish you still wanted us to read your stuff...
Wow! Got me interested.
ReplyDeleteOh, excellent! I know this is a good story anyway and this is definitely provocative.
ReplyDeletelove it, Christi!!
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