By Margie Senechal
Last week I typed the end on Suitcases. There's still lots of work to be done on it--like filling in scenes with details, adding a scene or two, and editing. And then probably a couple of rewrites after some people read it. But, having that first draft complete is instrumental in moving onto the next phase of finishing a novel well enough to put it out on submission.Once I'd figured out my ending, the pieces began to fall into place. I've used the analogy of jigsaw puzzle before, so I thought of another one. A clipper ship journey.
When ships left docks back in the day, they left with hope on the sunrise. Happy spirits flowed between the crew and passengers. Then the seas got a bit rough, food started to run out, people got sick, some died, and hope was but a memory. Until, the kid up in the crow's nest called out, "Land a'hoy!" and even though it was far off--perhaps days, perhaps weeks--the fire at the end of the tunnel had been lit and raised everyone's spirits. When they thought they couldn't go on for another hour, let alone a day, they now had hope. And Hope held them over to the end.
Yeah, that's how I felt when I found my ending.
Since then, I've started on the edits and I think this weekend, I'm going to head to B&N or the library for a few hours and just go through it like demon. I'm trying to get it ready for beta readers in the next couple of weeks. There, I put it out there into the universe. Now, I have to do it.
As for writing, I've gone back to Bix, the 9th edition, much to JV's glee. And since I always enjoy writing my boy, I'm having fun reconstructing his life. I might jump into the France story as well as I've been thinking about it as well. I might be a writer with a touch of scattered muse brain.
But, right now, I've got to get ready to walk into my cubby office, and start work. Have a great weekend and read a good book. Until I can offer up mine, here's a recommendation.
One of my favorite authors finally returned with a new book. Sarah Addison Allen's Other Birds is just wonderful. Her first book, Garden Spells, introduced me to magical realism, which I didn't even know I needed in my life. And now, I've finished my own magical realism book, Suitcases.
Okay, now you can have a great weekend :)
Congratulations on "The End." Can't wait to read the finished project. I love the clipper ship analogy so much!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I thought I was a mite clever with that one :)
DeleteWell done, Margie! Can't wait to read Suitcases!!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to have it read.
DeleteCongrats on finishing the first draft!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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